The Nitsch
Progress feedback:Address the intro page overall: 1. Scale. 2. Treatment of secondary level text. 3. Visually reflective of the inside system.Consider page titles as more integrated and less labeled upon the page.That monospaced typeface is a tricky one. Really watch for the rivers and odd rag being created in all the tids.Back arrow is clear, but reduce the size so it doesn't dominate the design. Consider its placement.
Up the contrast on the background images. I suggest improved consistency too. Orange bkgrnd with dark orange chair = Gray bkgrnd with dark gray chair.
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Address the intro page overall:
1. Scale. 2. Treatment of secondary level text. 3. Visually reflective of the inside system.
Consider page titles as more integrated and less labeled upon the page.
That monospaced typeface is a tricky one. Really watch for the rivers and odd rag being created in all the tids.
Back arrow is clear, but reduce the size so it doesn't dominate the design. Consider its placement.
Up the contrast on the background images. I suggest improved consistency too. Orange bkgrnd with dark orange chair = Gray bkgrnd with dark gray chair.
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