Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Revising: project 1



I shot a new photo that I think is working much better than the original, making the graphic feel a bit more tangible. With an all new scene, I am definitely forced to go back and finesse the graphics. Hows the legibility? Is the new photo working? Feedback?

2 comments:

jamie said...

Nice re-shoot. Much more engaging.

Question the color green. Isn't working "with" the other elements.

Question the typeface. Is very generic looking and bland.

spell check one more time, then plot!

jamie said...

one other thing... be sure the white text is legible on the light background. looks a bit light on screen - not sure about a print out.